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Post by ))Nocturne(( on Jan 23, 2007 20:34:43 GMT -5
And DayClan shall be doing...what? *so lost and confused* I can't tell if one of the ideas from previous posts is being used for them or not, and I figured I should be up-to-date on the happenings of dear Nocteh's Clan.
They could throw a party and ignore everybody else, but that would be no fun. Scandal! Intrigue! Craziness! There should be more of that. XD
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 23, 2007 22:54:37 GMT -5
Alright, let's see about this.
1. Some DuskClanner say something at a Gathering that makes DawnClan very very angry
2. DawnClan attacks DuskClan, resulting in crippling damages to DuskClan
3. Meanwhile, Razorstar has so conviently fallen in love with -gasp- a rogue
4. That rogue has a storm-related name (maybe...Gale?)
5. The ebil rogueh convinces Razorstar to join forces with the rogues, along with NightClan, and launch a counterattack against DawnClan
6. The uber-Clan drives DawnClan form their territory, and then DayClan as well, who have remained wisely neutral during the ordeal
7. Ebil rogue betrays poor Razorstar (I'm thinking...he thinks he kills her...-winkwink-)
8. They take over Sky Falls, ruling the forest with oppression
And Then...
From the ashes of his fallen clan, a young apprentice with a great destiny arises, determined to right his clan's wrongs and return the forest to the followers of StarClan...
Is everyone with me? Any objections, ideas?
As for DayClan - remember how I said in their description (yes, you should, since you got your bio codeword from the Clan Descriptions...^^) that they were very wise, despite being underestimated by the other clans? Well, some certain DayClan cat can have a vision - a prophecy! - of what is to come, including the rise to power of the uber-Clan, and how a "gale" shall destroy the clans...Eh?
Feedback.
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Post by duskeh on Jan 23, 2007 23:08:25 GMT -5
This all sounds awesome! I'm a little confused still but it's all good~ It's always difficult, though, to have a plot center around a one "chosen" cat, though. Hmm.
I like the bit about the prophecy especially. :D -has nothing to add at the moment DX-
I really need to make a bio soon. >_> <_<
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 23, 2007 23:13:10 GMT -5
I understand what you're saying. Maybe there could be a second prophecy, that includes destinies for a cat from each clan. And no single "champion" can succeed without the other three combined, but they don't know it all, because only one cat knows the prophecy. But somehow, they all connect, and good defeats evil in the end, blah blah blah, happily ever after. (Or maybe not "ever" after...)
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Post by duskeh on Jan 23, 2007 23:17:35 GMT -5
Oooh yeah. Randomly, I like the thought that perhaps from one clan, a certain cat think s/he is the "chosen" cat, but it turns out to be their sibling or something.  I think what would work well is that there is one prophecy, but each Clan receives different pieces of it. Ex: DawnClan sees the end of a hunt or something, and the hunter cat walking away, but DayClan sees the chase. Things like that. So the need to team up. Then the problem is getting them to know each other...but that shouldn't be to hard, what with Gatherings and such. |
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 23, 2007 23:28:34 GMT -5
Yeah, like one could see another at a Gathering and be like, "Whoa! Deja'vu!" Heh. But, would it be too much like the books, with every cat getting a vision. Maybe just one cat could, and then that cat doesn't realize that it is a part of the "chosen" as well until the end.
Like, the DuskClan chosen can be the rebel within the ranks, the NightClan chosen can be, hmm, a weaker cat shunned by the other cats...Am I getting too bleh on this? The DawnClan champ would attack from the outside with its own devices, and then the DayClan chosen (who I'm thinking should have the prophecy) can turn up at the end and be like, "What?!"
I think I'm going to confuse someone.
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Post by duskeh on Jan 23, 2007 23:37:20 GMT -5
That is like the books huh... I forgot. ^^;;; I can actually see it working better if only one cat has had this vision, and then has to sort of convince the others to believe him/her. And, just to clarify: at this point, the rouges are controlling the forest from Sky Falls. And a cat (or a cat from each Clan) is attempting to restore order to the forest as said in a Prophecy. ...Right? |
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 23, 2007 23:43:04 GMT -5
Yeah, exactly. But maybe not every one of the four is actually trying to save the forest. Like, the Dusk rebel and Dawn attacker from the outside are conciously doing it, but perhaps the Night and Day cats can have a different way of helping, a way they don't intend, but it all comes together in the end.
The only problem is, after we figure out what is going to happen, we need to figure out how to do it.
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Post by duskeh on Jan 23, 2007 23:52:04 GMT -5
Oh, yes! That makes much more sens now. I like it >:D.
DuskClan=Rebel; he could be messing with stuff just for the sake of it, and inadvertently kills someone evil/important? And then we have the repercussion of that on him/etc. Or something to this effect, as you said.
NightClan=Shy-ish type. Maybe s/he is good at listening since no one pays them much attention, and they find out a good deal of information...
That's all I can think of now. Ehe...
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Post by ))Nocturne(( on Jan 23, 2007 23:58:11 GMT -5
Ah, ok, that makes much more sense. XD Thank you very much, Wolfeh, that clarified my fuzzy brain a bit on the subject...And it made me feel so special, seeing as Nocteh would totally lean toward being neutral anyway.
I like the plot so far, although I am sorry to say that I can't add much on to it. >.> My plotting skills take time to set in, and I will probably be bursting with ideas at the exact moment the whole thing ends. XD
Anyway, I suppose I'm better at individual plottage; I have to think about certain cats, and I do more when I can imagine something that revolves around them. That is, if I can ever finish the plot at all. XD So, expect me to contribute more with either spur-of-the-moment stuff, or carefully-laid individual cat plots.
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 24, 2007 0:04:57 GMT -5
-gasp- I love that idea about the NightClan chosen, Duskeh! That was brilliant!
And maybe you're on to something with the Dusk rebel...instead of seeking to restore his Clan's honor and save the forest, he/she is a stubborn, hot-tempered cat who rebels for spite. The DawnClan champ can be the one out for the saving of the forest, while the DayClan seer watches from a distance (since he/she is living with DawnClan, along with the other DayClanners), not realizing that he/she is a chosen cat as well.
And maybe...we can bring in the original four! They can be the cats showing the Day cat the prophecy - Merlinstar, Nightstar, Ashstar, and Blazestar. Whooo!
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Post by W|E|S|T on Jan 24, 2007 0:07:04 GMT -5
Wow. The plot exploded. ^^ Yay!
*perhaps shall edit later when she is not dead*
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 24, 2007 0:10:18 GMT -5
Eh, me and Duskeh were on a tangent, I suppose... Heehee. I feel sorry for those who come on tomorrow ^^;;
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Post by ^(Dark)^ on Jan 24, 2007 0:24:43 GMT -5
-all this is mixing in with s.s homework and getting me confused-
I like it. I don't know how to add on to it right now (as said above, I'm getting confused a bit) but I'm good at plots and try to add my part later. -hopes braindeadness goes away.
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Post by |Marzi| on Jan 24, 2007 19:21:36 GMT -5
Vow x.x
-ish damaged-
That confused, but what I picked up wash very interesting. Very. Seriously. Apparently great minds all read the same books....
So, when is a summary going to be typed up, and positions made for the grab?! -likes making cats- Especially fodder cats. Who die in like the first battle- and then you can rp them through StarClan.. that is so much fun.. roleplaying their deaths...... -off topic-
Anyway, do you guys still want to add to this already SUPERCALIMAGICLICIOUS plot?
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