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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 22, 2007 17:07:12 GMT -5
Okay, here's what we need:
A Site Plot
So, next order of business. Any ideas? I would suggest somehow including the ever-present Dawn-Dusk feud, but interwine it with something important from Night and Day, too.
Okay, all you plotters, rap those brains and dust the shelves of your brilliant minds! It's PLOT TIME!!
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Post by .::Sapphireheart::. on Jan 22, 2007 17:17:18 GMT -5
I know I'm just a newbie, but I have a suggestion. Maybe DuskClan could launch an attack on DawnClan (Pretty simple so far, huh?) and defeat DawnClan. DawnClan, angry and smarting at their defeat, begin recruiting rogues, and launch a reverse attack on DuskClan. DuskClan is defeated this time, and go to NightClan for assistance. More rouges are constantly swelling DawnClan's ranks, and DuskClan desperately needs help, and goes to DayClan for help. DayClan is torn-if they join DuskClan, they may get defeated by DawnClan and get run out. But if they refuse DuskClan, than if DuskClan wins the war, they could decide to attack the Clan that refused to help them in their time of need. One night, one of the rouges commit mutiny, and attack the DawnClanners. The tom/she-cat takes over the Clan, and surprises DuskClan and NightClan with another attack, which leaves the two Clans barley alive. Now DayClan stands alone against the rapidly growing rouge band/DawnClan.
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Post by | Moonie | on Jan 22, 2007 17:34:56 GMT -5
--I like the idea, Sapphie, but neither Razorstar nor Wolfstar strikes me as the type to do the rogue-recruiting thing X3
I actually kind of like the idea of a storm destroying the Clans / a Clans, or Marzi's earlier idea, about the war-thing. -brick'd-
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 22, 2007 17:38:51 GMT -5
-Eyes burning from the sea of capital Ds and Cs-
Parts of that sound pretty good, actually. So no "I'm just a newbie"-ing, everyone here is a newbie, because this is a new site ^^;;
My suggestion, though, would be to switch the roles of Dawn and DuskClan, since Wolfstar has a deep hatred of rogues, and DuskClan actually comes from the lineage of a rogue named Blaze.
Hmm. DawnClan attacks DuskClan (infuriated at something that takes place at a Gathering, perhaps?), and then DuskClan recruits the rogues. Their retaliation attack leaves DawnClan severely crippled, but they don't ask for help just yet.
-LIGHTBULB-
Okay, going along with the mutinous rogue idea, let's say, after DuskClan recruits NightClan along their side, a rogue gains leadershship (I word it this way, because I do not necessarily want to state that dear Razorstar ... -dies- ...) They drive DayClan and DawnClan from their territories, and take over the Sky Falls, using the center land as their camp and home base for their rulership of the forest.
It seems that all has been lost, until one cat gets the notion that something must be done. This cat is actually in _______ (whatever we call this uber-rogue/Dusk/Night supremacy), and is the son/daughter of some once-prominent clan member. Cue hero music.
-deep breath- Okay, so I'm going to stop now, so no one shoots me. If you guys actually do like some aspects of this plot, then I will be happy to write it.
-dances away, thinking of all the wonderful little mini-plots she could create...-
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Post by |Marzi| on Jan 22, 2007 19:53:29 GMT -5
Wow... I need a moment to seperate Dawn- from Dusk. That was confusing. But ya, that thing with the rogues really seems to work, Maybe he could be named Storm-something or Storm? To keep your Spring of the Gale alive? Or something along those lines... The thing is, who is old enough to have an evil rogue child and no one really about it? I mean, if they are a prominent characters child, it would have to be a Leader/Deputy/Medicine Cat kit right? I mean, a warriors love affair just isn't that shocking -.-
And the name idea thing? I JUST read the c-box. I did't steal your idea >< I swear~!
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 22, 2007 21:12:06 GMT -5
Idea stealer! Ahh! Heh heh.
I was meaning a younger cat, and over a spanse of a little bit of time. Like, eh, Mr. Tom and Mrs. Queen have a kit while the intial seige is taking place, who grows to be an apprentice while the rogues are in power, and begins to rebel within himself over time. Understandable?
And maybe a solution to the Razorstar/rogue problem...does Razorstar hate loners? Or maybe it's only Dusk and Night at first, then somehow the rogue leader (maybe we should just name him "Gale" ^^) brings in his lot.
Just throwing out ideas XDD
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Post by W|E|S|T on Jan 22, 2007 21:31:10 GMT -5
I don't know. For the History of DuskClan that I'm typing up, I'm having Blaze have a thing for Dawn. Maybe we could incorporate that into things? For the war idea, I mean.
Unless of course, I'm totally crazy and ought to be taken into custody by Jedi Knights.
Which doesn't sound to bad, actually.
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 22, 2007 21:41:43 GMT -5
You were itchin' for that Dawn/Blaze romance huh? Are you planning on mutual affection, or just Blaze's lust. We can work this somehow...details?
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Post by W|E|S|T on Jan 22, 2007 23:42:21 GMT -5
Dawn's feelings for Blaze depends entirely on you. It would make more sense to start a full-scale war if she felt nothing for him. But I do love a good twist...
Gah, I'm killing everyone's established fandoms. Ignore me.
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Post by l.wolfeh.l on Jan 22, 2007 23:59:46 GMT -5
Well, um, Dawn is dead, and Wolfstar and the other DawnCats are decendants of that line somewhat. So, are you suggesting that the original feud began because Blazestar had feelings for Dawnbreak? Like, in the past? Which is why Dusk and Dawn still hate each other now? That would make sense...
I'm still trying to figure out how DuskClan/NightClan can hook up with rogues, but still suit Razorstar's hate of rogues...Hm.
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Post by W|E|S|T on Jan 23, 2007 1:30:11 GMT -5
Yes yes! ^^
DawnClan could be the strongest of the four Clans. In order to prevent them from getting butt-whooped, DuskClan could begrudgingly take on rogues. NightClan, seeing DawnClan an DuskClan's fight as an excellent opportunity to take out both Clans, could have rogues join their Clan, too, as a means of getting more force. *shrugs*
Meh...
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Post by ^(Dark)^ on Jan 23, 2007 1:42:06 GMT -5
Wow, I'm busy for a bit and now plot ideas popping up here and there. So its basically DuskClan and NightClan team up and then rogues are recruited some how? I may be getting things mixed up its real late where I'm at and I just got down with a load of homework. Anyway I like the idea and try to add on to it when I'm not tired and brain-dead of plots.
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Post by | Moonie | on Jan 23, 2007 18:39:38 GMT -5
-blink- Threadmovingwaytoofast. Anyway.
I think the most plausible reason for Razor to admit rogues into the Clan (along with, of course, the wish to best teh Dawners) is her falling in love with one of them (besides, that'd be more fun xD), who convinces her that the best chance to protect her Clan is by joining ranks with the rogues...and then the fun stuff happens. Yeah. -shot-
EDIT: If that's not complete crap / made any sense at all >>
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Post by ^(Dark)^ on Jan 23, 2007 19:51:56 GMT -5
No it made some since. Even though I'm still trying to find out what the general plot idea is. -shakes head and blames homework-
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Post by |Marzi| on Jan 23, 2007 20:19:31 GMT -5
Ok.. so we have caloborated(sp) and created..
DuskClan/DawnClan fight each other DuskClan recruites rogues maybe loners? Rogue leader has something to do with a storm -possible Clan kit Some sort of between-Clan love affair
Do I have everything?
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